Monday, 11 May 2015

Wonderful writing!

This morning we have been busy descriptive writing! We enjoyed watching a dive video and wrote as many interesting adjectives on our white boards as possible.  The children came up with some very impressive words! We have been choosing a particular species to write our best descriptions about, for  example: 

'The colossal humpback whale comes closer slowly moving its huge flippers towards my neck, it's looking for thousands of tiny krill to feast on' 

By Pallas 

In the process, we have been learning some very interesting facts about sea creatures.  The children are now very good at recongnising onomatopoeia and alliteration, as well as being very confident using adverbs to make their verbs more interesting! 






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